This is an update for my story.
I have decided to keep the version of the serial-killer clown in the circus and the detective.
My story will start with the unexpected cruel murders inside the circus during the performances. (Will start with some flashbacks with the clown's murders)
In my first scene the story will be showing a performance where the lights go off. In that point there will be seen a figure in the dark which goes to the audience seats and kills a woman. The figure then goes away through the exit door behind the audience seats but something fells from the figure. The lights go on again and everyone is shocked with the woman lying dead in the seat with a painted smile painted in her face.
The second scene is where there are newspapers shown with news like: "Serial killer in the town." Also in the second scene we are introduced to the detective which accepts to investigate the case after the call he gets in his office.
In the third scene the detective drives to the circus in order to investigate the crime scene. He investigates and he finds a clowns nose. (The object that fell off from the serial killer in the first scene where he murders the woman from the audience). During his investigation he is watched by someone in the circus. He goes back to his office to investigate the nose he found near the exit for any fingerprints.
In the fourth scene the detective scans the clown nose with his special instruments and identifies the DNA in the clown nose with the one of one of the main performer clowns in the circus. He prints the evidence and he stores it in his filing cabinet. Suddenly there will be a zoom in the scene where you will be able to see the clown's serial killer face in the background in the window watching him.
In the fifth scene the detective have stored all the evidence in his filing cabinet. The door knocks. He opens the door and he faces the clown. The clown attacks the detective. The fight until the clown stabs the detective and the detective lies dead near his filing cabinet. The serial killer leaves the detectives office without knowing that all the evidence that can put him in jail is inside the filing cabinet where the dead body of the detective is lies.
I have decided to keep the version of the serial-killer clown in the circus and the detective.
My story will start with the unexpected cruel murders inside the circus during the performances. (Will start with some flashbacks with the clown's murders)
In my first scene the story will be showing a performance where the lights go off. In that point there will be seen a figure in the dark which goes to the audience seats and kills a woman. The figure then goes away through the exit door behind the audience seats but something fells from the figure. The lights go on again and everyone is shocked with the woman lying dead in the seat with a painted smile painted in her face.
The second scene is where there are newspapers shown with news like: "Serial killer in the town." Also in the second scene we are introduced to the detective which accepts to investigate the case after the call he gets in his office.
In the third scene the detective drives to the circus in order to investigate the crime scene. He investigates and he finds a clowns nose. (The object that fell off from the serial killer in the first scene where he murders the woman from the audience). During his investigation he is watched by someone in the circus. He goes back to his office to investigate the nose he found near the exit for any fingerprints.
In the fourth scene the detective scans the clown nose with his special instruments and identifies the DNA in the clown nose with the one of one of the main performer clowns in the circus. He prints the evidence and he stores it in his filing cabinet. Suddenly there will be a zoom in the scene where you will be able to see the clown's serial killer face in the background in the window watching him.
In the fifth scene the detective have stored all the evidence in his filing cabinet. The door knocks. He opens the door and he faces the clown. The clown attacks the detective. The fight until the clown stabs the detective and the detective lies dead near his filing cabinet. The serial killer leaves the detectives office without knowing that all the evidence that can put him in jail is inside the filing cabinet where the dead body of the detective is lies.
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